This is too much for me!

i cann't take it!

You have a lot of imagination...cheers!

I liked it.

Well written story. However, watching and knowing how Mike and Jill were together on The Rookies, the way you have Mike protrayed in this story is hard to comprehend. I just don't see Mike being mentally insane or a threat to Jill. I feel there is a better way you could have protrayed Mike. Otherwise good story.

Great story. very well written, keep up the great work