Wow. I totally get what the poem is trying to say. One of the best I have read! Great job!

*Mudkipmon*

P.S. I loved the dedication you put into the summary! Very thoughtful.

interesting, but is that ment to be Kari you're talking about?

That one was awesome!

XD 'Nother Dark Ocean poem. very nice, very nice. ::fumes:: They really should have done more with that in the anime. stupid plotholes.

nice poem* keep it up!

Hi melinda! It's me! loved your poem!

Dragonzair

I had the impression of chibi Ken in the first few lines of the poem but when poems slowly flow by I realise it can't be him...he didn't have a sis, did he?

Yet another impressive, brilliant artwork from you, I've never come across it some how...I must be blind..X.X

wow!

I don't know what to say!

you did good!

Wow! Very interesting I like the concept, Your own Dark ocean, that's really original.Nice work!

Oooo,neat!Good poem._

A good ending, yeah! Triumph for a change. I really liked the raw emotions in this poem. Everyone has their own dark ocean.

I like your peoms very much! Keep writing more!

*sniff*

Tissue, please. I think i'm about cry.

LOL! Awesome! These are great! Your an amazing writer. Keep it up! _

Just when I thought I can't find any more words to praise this poet extraordinare, this poem comes and I just have to. Well, superb. Simply superb. Dark and deep, yet with a happy ending. Made me think what would I see if i looked into that dark Ocean myself...

this is ok... at first i thought it was ken, and then when i realized it was taichi talking about hikari... i kinda wish that it was ken, though...