Deep, very deep.

AH!

he is comeing, he is coming

Whoa, that is deep! Hye I finally got to review your fics! Yeah!

OOh, I likes.! o_o You can write poetry. I cannot. . Alas.

That was well written. Off to the next evil poem! Whee!

Wow, tha's the first poem abotu darkness that I've ever really read that spoke to me, I have battled my dark ocean many times, and continue to do so as my life changes and the world around me changes. This poem gives hope to all those wishing to finally vanquish their darkness forever. Thank you.

it was really good!- keep writing

bye for now!

Hmmm,this one's interesting.

But the word 'dark' was repeated 8 times.@_@(Yes,I counted.;)

Cool poem,though._

Dude! Awesome! This speaks on soooo many levels!

I think it's awesome how you used so little words yet they mean volumes. Cool beans!

Great poem. I think it was Ken, wasn't it?

i suppose that was ken, ne? an interesting POV... i like this one.

Joey:Thats scary and so is Kazu with underpants on his head *looks at Kazu*

Kazu:What?

Cooolll...poem me like..hehe! its nice and dark.

A good companion poem to your first poem...The Dark Ocean of my mind. However, I notice that you then to use the word dark a lot. Although you are talking about the dark ocean, it is better to not be so repetative with the word 'dark.' I understand you are trying to convey an image or a sense of darkness but it is best to vary your words or use images that could remind you of darkness. For example, bleak...or grim weaper...or death. Fiery...hell...or some other image that give you a sense of evil and desire. I am sorry if this comment offend you but that is what I think. However, beside that, the poem is a good companion poem to your first poem.

I'm sorry, I didn't see the summary for your other poem. I have experienced seeing my own "Dark Ocean" but I've always had my trust in the Light to pull me back. * Lady Light