kawaii ^.^! aw, poor kamui...

LMFAO! So hilarious. Poor Kamui. xD

Hm...I like that Fuuma's armpit smelled of sweat, very realistic there. And the story was cute. ^^

Really cute ^-^!

This is refreshingly cute in a fandom where angsty, depressing fics run in packs ^^ I must admit, however, that cute fics between Kamui, Kotori and Fuuma make me feel extremely... sad. Such things were never meant to last between them. *sobs into handkerchief*

All right, before I start being melodramatic, I will congratulate you on enchanting me once again. Your writing flows very well - I can see that you spend time to choose each word and image carefully. I must admit, I'm quite in awe of it.

xOxO

Such precious and yet somehow crazy kids. ^_~ I really liked the way you characterized Kotori here - most people tend to make her dull, even as a child, but you portrayed her as a mischievous little imp. The ending with Fuuma was cute too. Poor Kamui, a bride in such high demand.

Aw, how adorable! Kotori cheating was cute, but I really loved the small interaction between Fuuma and Kamui. It was an interesting twist that Kotori, as much as she likes Kamui, can tell there's something between Fuuma and Kamui.