Chichiri can be even harder to write than Mitsukake... To be honest I don't quite see Chichiri on the first half of the fic. It gets better to the end, and I like how he likes Nuriko's aura. 'Everything is a joke'-love this line )

Wwwwwwwwoooooooooo...that was so in charecter noda! I have read fics where Hotohori thinks about Nuriko dead, where Tasuki thinks about Nuriko dead where Miaka, Tamahome, Tomo (?), Amiboshi AND even Suzaku think about Nuriko after he dies noda. But I've never seen a Chichiri one like this. It was written so beautifully. Whimsical and brooding. Just like Chichiri is noda. It was so great. Thiers is a realationship that is not talked about hardly but they're quite good together as a team or as a yoi coupling don't you think na noda? In any case. I loved this and I hope to see another one from you soon noda. This totally blew me away and that's not easy to do na noda. Good job.

My regards

Noda no Miko

Quite good!

Aww! I loved this! It's so deep, very in-character. I love how you portrayed Chiri-kun. Keep writing, na no da!

I really love reading these stories...considering that they all seem to be kinda bunched up. At least you take your subject material seriously. Anyway, Chichiri! Um, wow, Chichiri is very Chichiri. Calm, rational, yet still grieving. A very good job indeed. And I love all these stories based on the seishi and miko's reactions to Nuriko's death. I think that's the point where people start realizing that FY isn't such a happy story after all. And your 1st persons are very well done. Well, ja!

Kinda short... _;;

Er...I'd love to read it...but there's nothing here!