That was very depressing. That last line was rather disturbing. "My name is Ou Chang, and my brother is dead." I just wanna sit in the corner and cry..

Lovely piece of work; a good realistic look at Chiriko's character, and good characterization of what Chiriko's brother might have been like.

*sniffles* That's so sad! ;.; Do you suppose that I could use this ficcie on my Chiriko shrine? And the one about Nuriko's death (from Chiriko's pov)? You're an excellent writer - I felt like I knew Ou Chang! Great job!

that was cool! I LIKED IT A LOT!

No, actually I didn't know that Chiriko had an older brother...but if he did, I'm sure he'd be a lot like your 'Ou Chang'. Yet another 1st person masterpiece, and the fact that it's from a 'secondary character' (if he wasn't your creation, I guess) makes it that much more interesting.

*Sniffle* Sad...that last line is really simple, but it's still so *powerful*...agh, poor Chiriko! T_T Beautiful fic.