lmao >D
can i get a transcript of that section of the shooting script plzthx?

Hee! This is genius. I love how this illustrated that small, unaired segment from the "Trash" script.

Aw so sweet :) (although kind of sad post Serenity), still a lovely little vignette.

I like the way you expanded upon that bit of cut script.

Aw, this one was ADORABLE, even if it was short. Gotta love Zoe and Wash...they are such a cute couple.

lol...that was a cute little story...great job!

aww. Nice story. Very in-character. I love his nickname: "lambie-toes".

Lambie toes! Hee!!

I really like how realistic this fic is. It conveys their love and affection well. Nice job!

I remember reading that conversation with Inara and Zoe. I thought it was funny. There wasn't too much interaction with the too, too bad that conversation didn't make the show. Great little insight.

Well now...guess even warrior women think they need to fake it on occasion;)

I am happy that you had Wash call Zoe out on it in an understanding manner, and Zoe accept his perceptive comment as it was meant to be. Definitely perfect for the moment and the characters;)

BEB

Oh, this is clever. I've always wondered what he said about that. Love the whole..."That would be telling." It's such a Wash thing to say. Very cute oneshot!

Nice! can you please let me know where this challange is taking place. I'd like to read the rest. I was thinking about putting that exact request. I wanted a story about Wash calling her in her mercy bluff. I love Wash for not letting her get away with it.