Tried singing along with the lyrics . . . it did not work. It was damn funny though, but who are the characters? I mena, sprite and elf? Who? Blank-'n'-Hlly, right? But, it can't be Chix, because he is the official distributer of STDs for the fairies . . . so who?!?

lmao, btw

This is actually pretty funny and one of the good Holly/Trouble fics on this site.

Trouble's an elf and not a sprite though.

lol thats good. id never b able 2 do something like that. wel mayb i would but anyway...

You made me laugh if nothing else!

it's really good but Troubles not a sprite

like it alot! made me laugh, which is considered a good thing (well, smile actually but hey)

weel... You may have missed a few lines, but I liked it. It is really really funny.

-GRose522

hey

i LIKE this song

and i DONT like Avril Lavigne for saying her fans have no lives

and i am NOT her fan

LOVE ur story

u...not so sure...

don't hide, ur an awesome spoof writer...

i think... *_*

awful

HEHE
that was really good

Can I just say, I think this is way, way better than the original. And my computer screen just sung it way better than Avril Lavigne ever could. I like v. much!

::pulls you out of hiding place:: That was diffrent than your usual writing! But it was amusing nevertheless though ;D

=crystalocean=

sometimes dim aldebaran. u amaze me. seriously. that wz crazy. who evr knew U mister-who-knows-everything-about-greek-literature-and-constellations wuld write a spoof'd song fic by avril lavigne. not to say that it didn't amuse me. in fact it really amused me. it wz so totally not wut i expectd! haha.

*smacks you on the head for being so fangirlish*

LOL, good one. I can so see that happening. Sort of out the beat, but the characters and situations are fitting. :D

"But all of the time she stuck up their nose:

she had a problem with his little bro."

Who doesn't?? ;P

*snortlaugh*

It made me laugh. Very funny. Very wierd. I like.

-Z-