pretty good. A little aimless, some grammar and punctuation mistakes but good. Though Joan's voice didn't really fit her persona.

pretty neat

More chapters please, I really liked this.

LOL!

I'm kinda disappointed to see that this is only a one-shot :(

Anyways, Great work!

Hey great fic! This is a good fiction about one of my favorite shows girlfriends! Any more chapters? keep up the great work!