hey, i finally got a chance to look at one of your fics =]
first off, i like the idea. its interesting, and i cant wait to see how the story develops.
when a character speaks, remember to start a new line. & i think i saw asuka call someone a git, which i believe is slang from england. yeah, so watch out for things like that.
other than that, good job.

I was a bit lost at the beginning, coz I thought Jin was outside the building and then u talk about Hwoarang being at the foot of the stairwell, and then I'm like "Howd he get inside so fast? haha"
But yeah, its a good start...kinda random, but a good start.
Cant wait for the next chapter!

ah! I liked that! im looking out for the next chapter! "Where Asuka goes, I go." That was a good line. You can just smell the HwoaAsuka lol

what have you done to Jun...resurected her...brought her back to life?!
Looks interesting..adding to my alerts.