 kuragari nikkou 2009-02-01 . chapter 1I hope they read this too. I like it! Ivan gets chased down by Marth fans, Mewtwo gets in a fight with an idiot, Roy gets left behind in the desert... Wait, what?!
Hoshi: Oh no! If I could, I would put a message in a bottle and tell them, but that's too slow and Marth's overprotective senses will beat me to it anyway. Ha, Isaac was glomped and Roy was being choked to death... No that last part isn't funny! Marth, too much love! TOO MUCH! |
 Black Light Princess 2006-08-07 . chapter 1Heh, I have to accept, you seem to be pretty good, ChibiRoy-san. Grammar, sacing, writing in general; everything OK. However, at the sole mention of riginal characters there tends to be a big loss in readers. Believe me, you have play your cards very well when doing so.
Other than that, it's pretty entertaining. Do continue. |
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