Nice work on Zoicite's mind.

Oooohhhh, angsty little fic. but its very nice

Feels like you were trying too hard on the ending. Tragic, that he realizes that he does hate her, but he is not strong enough to even care. Good story

So sad, it really shows how much Beryl screwed with his mind.*sighs* So sad.

Wow. Well writen, have you thought of writing three more to go with the other generals, or maybe the Evil prince and his thoughts on Serenity/sailor moon? that would be kool! anyways, later

Haruka's sister - Haruko

YOU IDIOT ZOICITE IS A GIRL AND SO IS BERYL!STUPID!

Please make this a series. It fwas really good and it would becool if Zoicite turned good again.

So much love and hate in Zoisite thoughts. I love Ami/Zoisite paring stories, so how can I not like this story. Keep it up. I would love to see a Mercury version too in the future.