haha, that was really fun to read! I enjoyed this considerably!

Ok, I'll bite. What the heck can tie-dye make someone blush and what was Kaito's reason for doing tie-dye anyway?

I adore this crossover. It's hilarious. You made just enough of an issue of the cultural transition to remind us it was there without dragging it on. Kaito and Ed's interactions nearly made me bite my tongue trying to keep quiet. And Al thinks he's a Fairy... *Snerk!*

This was amusing and cute. Good job ^^

So. Good.

^_^ I wuv Kaituo :3

i like this story a lot! this is one of my favorites, you should write them coming to kaito's world and kaito learns some alchemy! :)

There are sequels? :)
Wow, and congradulations! A very interesting and (as always) well written peice. Very interesting idea... -Especially- how Hakuba is now their "world's only practicing alchemist." Ha! And Kaito is learning to speak german, of course -completely- a coincidence. Beautiful as is, but would be wonderful if additonal exploratory companion peices were to be written.

I absolutely love this. Brilliant. *Is at a loss for words* Even though i've never seen this particular crossover before, you've made it so believable. I definintely worship you now.

*blinks* ...How did I miss that this was up here?
Anyway. Much love. ^^
"Oh, Bugger." Indeed. XD
Love how you did the language barrier, by the way. It just../fits/. Plus it's more fun that way, as I'm sure you noticed. ^^
"Kitty Kid?" XD That right there is worth the price of admission by itself!
Though Al's pulling him out and his comment while doing so just might be even better. *cackles merrily*
"That there was a stabby death, that motion was a strangly death, okay, he wasn't sure about that one but it certainly looked painful, that was a shooty death..." *cackles* Gotten quite familiar with the sign language of threat what with hanging around Nakamori the way he does, hasn't he?
Absolutely adored the entire scene from Al's POV. Doesn't hurt that it was also bloody hilarious as well as oddly adorable. ^=^
"sometimes he wondered if the kaitou was part ninja..." And that's just a beautiful line. XD
Really, the dynamic between Kaito and Al is just too adorable for words. ^=^
"Keep out of Al! He is not your personal hotel!" XD And that's too /hilarious/...
"Kitty made a speculative sound, then barked softly. Ed decided to strangle them later," *cackles merrily* As is that. /Would/ explain part of the personailty conflict, wouldn't it? :D
"'I despise you' transposed many language barriers." XD
Oh, gods, the already-occupied-armor scene had me cacking /hysterically/...
"... or he could be adapting himself just fine..." *cackles*
Love how very well you captured the culture shock and unfamiliarity and homesickness, by the way. Did a really nice job on the emotions overall.
And the Epilogue is just /priceless/. First time I saw Hakuba as the world's first practicing alchemist, I started laughing delightedly, because it's just such an at once unexpected and completely fitting idea.
And happy endings are always nice. ^^

Cute Story. Very funny. It really must be hard to be in a completely diff. world and not know what anyone is saying.

Haha, I'd never thought I'd see an FMA - MC crossover. Very funny. Theories were interesting even if it differs from a good deal of the ending of FMA, anime anyway.

Are the sequels in your LJ? FF.N cuts off hyperlinks so it was blank when you uploaded it.

That was quite funny. The translation issue was my favorite part. The interaction between Ed and Mustang was also very amusing.

Its the return of the blasted red stone! ^_^ This fic makes me squeal with delight.

You should know that the link you wanted to put on the bottom of the page doesn't work. And, yes, there are spelling errors and the like. For example, breif.