Oh my God... I am crying... That was so shocking... Very good...

Well it is Akane/Ranma but is one sided Shampoo/Ranma bcause she cried and smiled(I think she's just happy to see her beloved one be happy)so she DOES love him, and also she didn't heard what Akane said, mayb she said NO.

Ya know I finally got that its Shampoo looking like Akane...but..dam man...that was cruel...shesh.

Aww... poor Shampoo, but you have to admit, Ranma and Akane make the BEST pair

Don't worry Shampoo weirdo glasses guy will save your broken heart lol

what happened! why is it a shampoo and ranma story! and why is it too short! that bit is very dramatic but i need more details!

T.T I though I was going to read a Shampoo and Ranma Fic.. Finally.. Turns out it's not.. Can't anyone write one ? Please?

Very poignant.

Since you say this is a Ranma/Shampoo story, I can only assume that Shampoo has somehow transformed herself into Akane in order to get Ranma. Maybe by using the Akanenicuan or something...

If so, that would explain why she's crying and smiling at the same time: winning the man she loves, but under the guise of someone else. Having to live with the fact that Ranma is only capable of loving Akane and not her, would make it a bittersweet victory at best. Either way, that's got to be painful.

Great story - especially for one so short!

you're playing with my EMOTIONS damn you...

interesting...but really short

huh?

That was tragically sweet. Shampoo/Ranma doesn't have to mean they're together.

You know, for a moment, I thought it was Shampoo and Ranma getting married. Needless to say, it killed me once "Akane Tendo" came out.

A virtual stab in the heart. Very poignant.

I am going to kill you now. Slowly, painfully, and with as many blunt instruments as I can find.

#$*&ing liar, don't say RanmaShampoo if you don't mean it.

Very nice! I love it!

The 'metal blue eyes' thing sort of scared me. It doesn't quite go with the theme of softness... maybe 'cobalt', or 'sky blue' would have been a better term. Oh, I don't know.

So... Shampoo is watching the wedding of Ranma/Akane. I JUST got that. I thought it was Akane watching Shampoo/Ranma.

You know, for the whole series, I thought Shampoo only wanted to marry Ranma so she wouldn't be disgraced in her country... but I guess she sort of does like him a lot, hm?

Very prettily written. (AHH LOTS OF T's) I invisioned it to be all white and serene...