Hehe, despite the fact I hate smoking, it's a very cute situation! Love how you've done them interacting! Adorable!

I love Yuffie's description of Vincent!

The justapositon between Yuffie and Vincent's personalities is a astounding, yet you write their interactions so naturally. You have a great way of describing things-I can actually see the images in my head, and your characterization is wonderful-Yuffie's over-eager childish exhuberance is so Yuffie-ish if that makes any sense. You are definitely a rarity on this site, and although I've only read two of your fics, you are definitely my favorite in the genre.

Yep she really does have it pretty bad. Heh make cigarettes with him, pink lighter...(theres a pic out there with vin lighting up with a pink lighter? I want it). So good imagery and storyline, and it actually was a partial yuffentine I enjoyed.

I was gonna submit a 2 paragraph long review but there was an error and I lost it, so im just gonna say good job, this story was entertaining for me, and I dont see too many first persons of this caliber.

Nice story. :) The dialogue was particularly good. I thought the beginning was a little bit slow, but after that it was pretty good. I liked the way you portrayed Yuffie's childish crush. It seemed more realistic to me that way, and amusing too.

I wasn't quite so sure about Vincent's characterisation... if he thought Cloud was a nuisance, wouldn't Yuffie be even worse? But his laconic tolerance just about works. The whole thing is well-written, which always helps. :)

DAMN YOU! I SO WANTED TO HATE THIS!

(update soon! _!)

I'd hate to say it (and I mean I really HATE to say it) but with this story I can see something spark between the two. OH MAH GAH!

Anyway, lovely work as always.

Always saw Vincent as a smoker or at least casually smoking. Perhaps not rolled up cigarettes, he somewhat strikes me as a Malboro man (Reds of course) or maybe Camel non-filtered. And the thought of Yuffie wanting to roll up his ciggies was cute. What better way to get close to your sweetie or crush, right? *Sigh*

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I always read your VinTi's, But MAN! This was so good!

See, I personally am a huge Yuffentine fan, but I'll like any pairing if written proper. And you nailed it! Spot. On.

And Yuffie was just so perfect with her overeagerness. She reminded me of me when I make a huge ass of myself infront of my crushes... Anyways, we don't need to aim into my nonexistant love-ife. So yes, this was an awsomly written story, as usual.

I don't know if its just me but I am addicted to your writting... I wonder if theres a fansite...(JK)

Thanks for posting!

-UberFreak

Great fanfiction! Poor Yuffie, she made an ass out of herself!

Dx

Haha, you don't like Vincent and Yuffie together very much, huh? But you're right! There are alot of bad written VincentYuffie fanfictions. I've struggled to read through them just because it felt wrong to finish one chapter and not finish the others, but if it was so bad, I'd usually stop reading all together. But there are diamonds in the coal! In all the fanfictions out there, no matter what the couple!

I'm not that baised on couples if they have a good reasoning behind them. :3

Great job! I love how this is written! Why aren't you an author?

Haha, Yuffie doesn't smoke, but she wants to roll a cigarette for Vinnie! XD How cute! Vincent never crossed me as a smoker though. -shrugs- Guess he just never rubbed me that way. But if he hangs around Cid, he might as well be smoking. XD

Awe I'm so incredably flattered!

Well, I'm glad to say that you didn't have yuffie out of character at all by my standerds. I don't have a realt problem interacting with guys but when I really like one, like you and Yuffie, I sometimes cringe at the stupid things I say.

Ever had a guy you're crushing on sit you on his lap?

Shit, I was about to die and go to heaven right then and there. But anyways, back to the story.

Amazing idea, I was wrinkling my brow when I found out what he was doing like a: 'where is she going with this' expression. Now I see how it intermixed into the idea of spending alone ime with Vincent and I was like, wow, she's crafty!

Very nice first chapter, I can't wait to see the next one, I hope I get to see some of your famous Tifa characterization. I couldn't help but notice that you said Tifa was in on the little circle Vincent iked to talk to. For some reason that striked me in a way, I stopped to think about it.

Sure, Vincent talked to Tifa in AC, but not very much at all... Only 'Where can I buy a phone?'

Which was halarious...But now that I think of it, I'm THINKING that Vincent and Tifa could have a small companionship thing. Like he can stand being in the same room as her, no one can say Tifa isn't attractive, but... I don't know, I just have never seen the two interact very much, maybe that's why I'm so standoffish to the whole idea. There are just certain personality traits that I see in Tifa that would clash too horribly wit Vincent's...

If you want any ideas on Yuffie's personality as well as Vincent's, watch this:

(w).youtube.(com)/watch?v8Fi4-9lhvoo

Aw... So cute. Yeah, I'm not much of a Yuffentine, but this was cute. A different look at things. Really made me see Yuffie's childish adoration, yet with something a little more mature underneath that even she might know about.

And Vincent rolling up... How fitting. I could totally see him do that- just another piece of a world that's gone.

Hey, wanna challange me for a fic? Anything?

Yes, the mental image WAS quite amusing.

Haven't really read anything in awhile but I'm damn glad I read this. It's just damn awesome. I think you did Yuffie pretty damn well. Absolutely loved her in this and Vinnie was just.. Vinnie :3

I would love to read more 3

very well written. its very unique and u didn;t write it like most ppl do, where vinnie would kiss her at the end or something stupid like that! yours was really origional...

vinnie smokes O.O