very very good

“I think I may have made a mistake there.”

That is SO the Doctor! SO in character! Oh wow, I love it. I like the way you remembered about Clomb and Raxa-whatever and however you spell it. That there could be conflict...! I hope you have a good sleep and the rest of your sugar rush wears off, too... :) Your spelling and all that other stuff is great as it was before, and even though Rose has changed in appearance I'm glad she's still the same old Rose! The first bit is intriguing. Fill me in with a new chapter ASAP :) I need to know what happens, and seeing as I have a pointless summer stretching ahead of me, I have lots of time to read :)
SP

PS: Yeah... I noticed the Dalek... he's involved in one of my other Doctor Who fics... that one had a happy ending XP :D