 lollerpoop 2008-10-17 . chapter 1haha u tricked me >_<
i really thought it was the "original" kim that was talking to her nana
nice twist!
;) |
 RedBlueGreen 2008-07-01 . chapter 1Cute. Well constructed and neatly misdirecting. I enjoyed it, thanks. |
 SickAndWrong 2008-05-02 . chapter 1Ah, the beauty of a well-executed misdirection. Simply marvelous!
Yeah, you got me. My poor twisted little brain latched (for a moment) onto a twenty-something Shego hooking up with a teenaged Kim Possible's elderly grandmother. Again, well done. I had to read it over again with the new perspective.
Some grammatical hitches, but so minor as to not really bear mentioning. So, uh, pretend I didn't mention them!
I see you too were a victim of the Section Break Catastrophe? Maybe centering your breaks would make them easier to look at, if you don't like using the line tool? Just a thought... |
 Daryl 2006-10-25 . chapter 1excellent story |
 Jyuami 2006-10-21 . chapter 1that's a really cute one-shot.:D i'm glad to read something post kim/shego get together. it was fluffy and sweet, i enjoyed it. :D |
 Ranchero D 2006-10-10 . chapter 1 Read your story here a couple of times over, and I like it. Shows great imagination using the KP gang.
Want to thank you for your input on my little story. I'll try to fill in the paragraphs as you suggested. One reason I did that is when you put your text into the format FF uses, it makes it hard to read for several of my friends who are sight impaired. I don't have 20-20 myself, either. LOL!
Good input from ya, though. Thanks for the kind words.
Your story IS good as it stands. I think referring to it as 'tripe' is a little harsh. but it is sincere criticism, I think. Thanks again. Keep writing!
Dave |
 Chikiko 2006-10-02 . chapter 1how cute! |
 spectre666 2006-08-08 . chapter 1If you are going to post a sdamn KIGO, would you have the courtesy to say so so I don't waste my time with this tripe |
 Invader Johnny 2006-08-08 . chapter 1Kim and Shego have a few grandchildren huh? didn`t see that coming.
I`m guessing this is a one shot?
Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
 Charys of the shadows 2006-08-07 . chapter 1how many generations in one place! nice little fic. x |