Very well written. Simply beautiful.

poor mimi.great writing, keep it up.

Absolutely well written and thought out.

THIS is Mimi's story.

Great job. I loved the closing.

Wow, that's all I have to say. This was an excellent look into Mimi's world and the ending words were simply so thought-provoking...good job. This is going on the faves.

Whoa. That was powerful.

This was great! I guess you won't continue, but if you do you should have Roger in it and he yell at her family or something. It would just be... great. But still, even if you don't, GREAT fic. I hope you win! :D