wow...that was beautiful :) have you considered doing one in sasuke's POV?

lol ur making naruto sound so intelligent tee hee hee but it's sexy how the uke wants to get his man to see notice him becoz nothing is ever determined. and for those flamers. all u need to say is Don't you smell man-sex when you click on Naruto K+ or M rated fics. -cuddles you te he he he he he he