another great chapter. Again, I hate Trish Stratus (I'm not much of a diva fan), but I understood her pain. She loved her boyfriend, but wanted some time to herself. It's very belivable.

Carlito made me laugh. For some reason while reading this he sounded like Captain Caveman in my head. Funny...anyway, I though it was cute how it ended.

I hope you're still writing this. I can't wait to see whatelse you come up with.

Very impressed!

xoxoxo

Shanny

It's a powerful writer that can make you root for someone you hate. I HATE Lillian Garcia, she's a waste of space on wrestling. I can't figure out her purpose or why she's famous. However in your story, I actually liked this Lillian. The angst between she and Rob was wonderful.

And Rob was such a character. Great job!

xoxoxo

Shanny

You know what's funny? I just listened to a podcast interview with Orton tonight and he is just that cocky. But I still love him and hate Ashley. You made me feel sorry for her, that's not easy.

I would love to beleive that he changed his ways, but I guess we'll never know for sure. I also love the premise behind this story and the set up you do for each chapter. It's very unique and very well written.

xoxoxo

Shanny

This has to be one of the sadest things I have ever read. I loved Billy and Torrie together, she was still then before she looked like Skeletor.

I really love that it's set in the WCW days, those were the good old days. And that little girl when she made a picture for her mom to take to the angels, broke my heart.

I can't wait to read more!

xoxoxo

Shanny

Alright, Hanna. I finally got the opportunity to check this out and actually write the review.. The whole thing with Trish, Carlito, and Cena was really captured well, especially the part with Cena being the awesome friend that kept the ship afloat before any trouble even started. It really goes to show you, the Chain Gang's support base really does go both ways. And I would complain about ignoring Trish's real life fiancée, but there really is no reason to do such a thing (complain, that is). Since you captured the Trish-Carlito thing really well. Now back to the two chapters I read before but for some reason or another never got to review.

Chapter 2: Orton-Ashley? I never understood that pairing. But hey, whatever works. Especially since pretty-boy got a serious dressing down at the end with the history-making dumping of the century. I mean, Cena I'm okay with cause he leads the Chain Gang and everything, but Orton? Combine his egomaniacal state both in and out of the ring, and I don't know if I'm that comfortable with his body being the main reason he gets thrown into every story and every pairing imagineable and otherwise. That means I could become a major ass and get a six-pack and get anybody and anything I want. Personally, and please tell Christian Cage I'm saying the OPPOSITE of what he says if he ever asks if I'm trying to steal his trademark, that's *not* how I roll. Yes, even the six-pack part. I'm healthy enough to be me and I'm satisfied with it.

…basically, all I just said here is I think I have a greater moral fiber than Orton and therefore deserve more respect, and I'm glad he got dumped instead of come to in this story, and… nevermind. I think I just lost track here.

Chapter 3: RVD-Lilian. I think this one is a bit more generic based on the fact that RVD is cool and Lilian doesn't really get into much drama, but when something does bother them… nevermind. I don't know what it is, but I don't get why they mesh, but I do get that they mesh well. The storyline with Benoit and Victoria being the couple's main two friends was actually kinda good, considering there are alot of others who could probably fit the role better alongside Rob and Lil. Whose teasing before CB showed up, by the way, was hilarious when I read it the first time. Spider monkeys? What a vivid imagination! Yet coming from that guy, I'm not surprised. Perhaps I should've asked you for lines that RVD could use as a member of DX.

P.S. Just a question: are these all gonna be about relationship pairings?

Man... don't apologize... this was a great chapter! I really enjoyed it and Trish fics are making me sad. LoL Am so sorry to hear you have blood poisoning... hope all is well and I will be praying for you!

Katie

Oh that is so sweet. I see the looks Lillian was always giving Rob, the secret smiles when he was in the ring.

AW! YAY!

At first I was like well damn, this is emo. NO MORE EMO! lmfao, especially with Trish. :-(

This was so cute! Carlito is adorable. I'm excited for Unforgiven tonight, I wonder what will happen with her.

That's awful about the blood poisoning! Jeeze! I hope you're alright!

Have you ever thought of writing professionally? Honestly..!

You have a gift - and that is letting me share the emotion of the person you write I read your story I can feel the pain and the happiness your characters are feeling.

Great idea to write about Trish and Carli, I think they fit so perfectly together..and now shes leaving, I cant believe it.

Thank you for all those wonderful years, Trish!

Aw so Sweet!

Aw So Sweet!

aw that was so cute and so beautifully written *sniff* ;) Update soon

OH MY GOSH I LOVE THESE STORIES BUT IM JUST WONDERIN... WHERE IS THE JOHN/MARIA STORY I KNOW YOUR GOING TO WRITE BUT I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT ITS ABOUT! JUST KEEP THEM COMING! EXCELLENT JOB! ILL BE LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTERS AND TO THE UPDATE OF "BASIC THUGANOMICS" I LUVE THAT ONE TOO! UPDATE SOON! THANKS!

AW!

I love it!

Great job. Love how Rob and Lilian couldn't tell each other that they like each other and kept getting interrupted.

Good job. Write more!

Katie

AWW! Okay, best chapter EVAR! LMFAO

I was watching the RAW 10th Anniversary special when he wore glasses and he was so adorable! Plus, he has the best butt in the biz!

I heart it the non-emo stuff too! You're such an awesome writer! This was perfect!