Wow. The way you word things and captivate the reader by describing the pivotal moments is amazing.

Wow, that's intense - gave me the shivers.

Interesting way of thinking it out. Nit pick moment: you've got alter (as in ego) for altar (as in place of worship). Good poem. The sexual imagery of kneeling for communion was especially good, because one aspect of Angelus underplayed by many is that he was clearly VERY sexual. More please.