Hi there! Great story! Absolutely loved the plot! It was really cute. ^_^

Love one-shots, Love silentshipping. One word to describe this ficcie: Perfect. Well for me at last. Anyway I'm going to beg and it's going to be very sad (for me, I hate begging). Would you please pwetty pwetty please update Visions Of Love, I'm kinda hooked on that story. Sorry I didn't review that story but I'm very lazy so... And of course the problems with my computer (think: girl hitting computer.) Yeah, I'm a girl even tough the weird name but still.Please update CrazyBeautiful 2. Love your stories *gives Seto and Serenity plushie*

From the SetoxSerenity loving and totaly crazy
Troubled Spirit Of Hell

P.S. If you ever want to mail someone about like whatever you can mail me:

There should be punctuation after dialogue.

‘There ain’t no way I’ll forget this Seto...no way possible.’

"I thought that was obvious," he said which made her smile as their lips met again.

Other than that, I thought it was Kaiba was a bit too OOC; I loved the general idea and feel of it, though.

That was really good! Congratulations to this
SP

Aww! So sweet! Serenity and Seto dancing underneath the moon light. I need to work on writing my chapter! Oh gosh! I need to do it! I'm so excited to work on it! ^.^
Seto x Serenity Always Together Forever~!~