Don't take this personally, but I'm not really pleased with where America's leader is taking the country:
'President' Obama has won the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize. This puts Barrack on the same level as Mother Teresa, and Mohammed Gandhi and the like.

When I got home, I asked my sister what he's done to 'earn' that honor. Apparently tearing down the country he rules counts.

The First person to congratulate America's leader was Fideal Castro--the communistic dictator of Cuba!

I wish I had a copy of the newspapers that had WTF when they heard the news because I agree.

The United States is being torn down. America is no longer a nation in power, or even a superpower.

The Colonies have lost God's blessing that the Founders sought and desired.
The world is falling apart around us.
The time to take a stance is NOW!

I'm not going to demand an update.

I just need to vent, and let people know my opinion on what follows--you can agree, or disagree because this country is free. For the moment.

more!more!more!

you should add more chapters to this story. Otherwise it was really good.

I think you made a mistake in chapter one, as to how many people know Danny's secret, there aren't five, there are six, after all, Danny has to know too. I'm not trying to be smart or anything, I just point little things like that out.

ok so hurry and update this is getting REALLY good! ^_^

I know exactly how you feel. Fanfiction is impossible in college! I realized that around this time last year as regards to a story that is STILL unfinished, sigh. Anyway, good luck with everything. I hope you get your inspiration/spare time back at some point because I miss reading your stories. =)

please take this up again i read the other story and it was not good at all



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Hello there. I really dont want to be a 'complainer' but I do have a request for you.

Jesica01's writing is very different than yours, but thats a natural thing, all writers are a little different from each other. The problem comes about in how she writes. She doesnt describe, or if she does its in one big paragraph and the rest is just dialouge. And you can hardly tell who's talking because she doesn't use 'said' often. Her writing is also very rushed. Its as if she's just trying to get the story out as fast as possible, without care for the content. The chapters, being rushed as they are, are extremely confusing.

My request is that you send you a message, just giving a few tips or sugguestions on how to improve her writing. Sadly (I looked through the reviews for her version of the story) she doesnt get much constructive critism, most of its just boarder line flame. I left a message for her, but I'm not sure if she'll take my suggestions as an attack or a flame rather than the constructive critism that it is. I think she'd responed positivly should one of her favorite authors give her those suggestions, rather than a complete stranger whoes work she's never read.

Just a small request, you dont have to if you dont want to, or if you think she'll take it the wrong way.

Good luck with college, I know how crappy it can be. (I'm actualy procrastinating right now. All I've done all week has been school, work, homework. and im sick and tired of it! ^.^ so I'm just being lazy tonight)

Ah well, but I'll be sure to check it out!

'goths never skipped' lol, highly entertaining!

By far the best Danny fiction I've read. You do a beautiful job keeping the characters in context and the witty banter is delightful!

aw... i was all excited to see an update but...

it'd be better if *you* did it, i'm sure...

:(

I know I've already thanked you once for this, but thank you so much! And I know college is hectic. All school is.

She isn't all that good. It's hard to read with her. I don't like what she's doing and this may be mean but it is true.