Very nice!

*waves goodbye*
the knitted blanket was a nice touch :)

T-T Are you going to have a sequal? cause isn't some of your oneshots set in the future?

What?!? Max didn't say goodbye to the kids?

No small children in floods of tears because their friend is leaving?

How could you?

ohh, I should have discovered this ages ago!

No, I really didn't think she would have to leave, how can they do that! Poor Maria, to have another parent figure have to leave her. I thought we would get to see her saying goodbye to the children.

Aw, I'm going to miss this story so much, I can't wait for more of Max and Evan

What a sad ending! Please bring Max back, please?

*lower lip wobbles*

IwillnotcryIwillnotcryIwillnotcry

*bursts into tears*

and of course you -had- to leave it on such an unresolved tense note! sheesh! I mean, what about logan? hunh? he was cute!

hmph. you better do another soon.

yikes!

and owch about being sent home, the IOA really do suck sometimes.

aw, final chapter? damn, guess you'll just hafta write a new story then ;)

Well, that answers my question that I asked about in my post on Dark Secret, now on to the next chapter. Oh by the way, when does Max confront Elizabeth about letting her know what is happening in Atlantis.

Just the -one- more?

The IOA are a bastard bunch, good chapter tho

-pets Max- poor poor Max... But Why would she have to leave the base? its not she's military or something!

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now UPDATE!