This is really deep. It shows how Truman can't easily adapt to real life.

See, that's what I don't get. Truman would not regret the decision he made only that he had to make it. He wouldn't have regret for the past he'd feel hatred, and having lost Sylvia he'd regret his whole life then jump. Still not a bad fan fic

Sorry. I didn't like it. It moves on way too fast and not much detail. You should have just elaborated and made it longer. I like the thought of what you were writting though.