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| Konoha's White Fang 2008-05-24 ch 5,  | abusewow, well-written story! i've been looking for another great story and i have finally found one, can't wait for more |
| Jemiul 2008-04-19 ch 5, | abusea fantastic chapter. I love it. Keep up the great work. Jemiul |
| moodiful819 2008-04-15 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter. Sorry this review is seriously lacking after such a wonderful piece of writing, but I have homework to do. |
| moderndayportia 2008-04-14 ch 5, | abuseThe bit about the "stop the stilted metaphors" made me laugh cause I was thinking the same thing. You have this kind of self consciousness within your writing that is rare in fanfictions. I think it makes a work more cohesive when the author is consistent in their motifs (i.e. the candle metaphor) and it helps the reader feel invested as the plot progresses (or starts in this case LOL). Nicely done |
| JiraiyasGirl 2008-04-13 ch 5, | abuseWhat the hell happened to make Tsunade drop her illusions?!?!? This story has been amazing so far please keep up the good work and I can't wait to see more. I love this new twist. I'm sorry I didn''t review each chapter but I got so caught up reading I couldn't stop for the life of me. Hope to see the next chappie b-4 global warming trully sets in. hahaha : ) |
| beautyinsleep 2007-12-25 ch 4, | abuseWow, I love this! Very well-written, and your portrayals of Kakashi and Sakura are amazing. You are a master of emotions, especially in this chapter. This is absolutely wonderful, and I really do hope you update soon! :D |
| DjMinki 2007-10-02 ch 4, | abuseAmazing, Simply Amazing! Your writing style is just beautiful very descriptive and extremly enjoyable to read. There wasnt even any noticable errors. PLease update soon. |
| Sakura no Yoru 2007-05-29 ch 4, | abuseYOU MUST UPDATE THIS STORY! I LOVE the comparisons you made of the characters! *stares with wide eyes at the screen expecting another chapter to pop up...* |
| hello heartbreak 2007-04-17 ch 4, | abuseJust one thing to say: Can't wait for the next chapter! XD |
| hello heartbreak 2007-04-17 ch 3, | abuseNot a fan of NaruSaku, but I absolutely adore the way you described their relationship. Something definitely more than friends, but not romantic. Very heartwarming indeed. ^__^ |
| rae110 2007-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, when are you coming out with the next chapter?!?! I realy like this story and I'm dieing to find out what happens next. Hurry...but make it good. |
| Norikoko 2007-04-06 ch 4, | abuseupdate soon, please :) |
| moodiful819 2007-03-17 ch 4, | abuseI love this. Philosophical thinkings were always a comfort to me, the Kakasaku is just an added bonus to this. I can't wait for the next chapter. it's too well-written to stop. |
| moodiful819 2007-03-17 ch 3, | abusethis was very deep. I like it. it's like a rainy day and you're staring at it from your window. It has that kind of feel. |
| moodiful819 2007-03-17 ch 2, | abuseMan, this is cool. hey, what's that theory you mention earlier? I'm just curious. |