is that it? to be honest it wasnt worth the effort of reading, it was pointless, led nowhere and you tend to expect something better given the angle (good angle by the way)

loved it

this is really good... please continue :)

Good freakin, fanfic.

This is a really promising start, but I do feel like I've come into a story that started already where the movie finished. Please keep writing. It would be nice to see a great Gony fic.