The story hasn't been updated in a long time, but if you decide to continue it... Major SheeLloyd fan here.

everything is filling out great, keep going. Shelloyd all the way :D

Hm... interesting story so far. It's nice to see someone taking the time to flesh out Sheena's background story during the game for once. Anyway, here's my take on it.

The chapters are a bit short; bite-sized, really. Something that you can read rather easily and without having to invest a lot of time in. With that said, there's good and bad things to that. The good is that some people like that, especially if they prefer that the writer only uses what information is available in the game to fully flesh out a character's personality. The bad is that others (like myself) would prefer to see a story that is more in-depth and provide a good view of the personality of the character that has been fleshed out even more. That's what fanfiction is for, after all- to provide your take on a character, either through the game or an extension of it.

It seems most of the characters are in play and written well. Might be nice to see more of the Chosen's group and more possible interaction, but you're just getting to that in the timeline of the game itself. If you're looking for a pairing, I prefer Sheloyd pairings. I disliked Colette and Lloyd, because I think Colette wouldn't try to actually restrain Lloyd if he were to ever do anything completely reckless. Sheena is more his speed, mentally that is. They seem about on the same page (especially in the battles where they interact at the end), unlike Colette. Colette seems to balance better with Zelos, I think, in comparison. So my take on it would be Sheena and Lloyd, then Colette and Zelos. Their personalities balance out very well in those pairings, from what I can tell.

I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.

Ah...good to see you didn't give on on this cool story :)

And by pairings I assume you mean Sheena and someone else. My suggestion: Lloyd. That's just me though XD

yes go 4 Sheloyd, i alrdy sed it once but still, i 4got 2 say that i think this story's great in my last review. Keep it up!

If r going 2 put in a couple i say it should be Lloyd and Sheena
Best couple around!

uh... this is pretty good so far. Sheena's a hard character to right for, because her moods change on a dime, and you've done very well.

other than that, please, please, please, no shelloyd. I'm a huge sheelos fan, and, uh...Lloyd is just so not right for her! I love sheena, and well, Lloyd's very close to the idiot side of the scale. PLus, Colloyd is really, really obvios. So, with that said,

SHEELOS, SHEELOS, SHEELOS!

Please forgive this very strange (and long) review. But, think about it, k?

(oh, and...good job!)

keep it up, i want to see more of her adventures

:nods: Yesh. Go with Shelloyd! You're the writer! I think it's a good idea. XP But I love anything Sheena x, so it's alright! I like it! Continue, por favor!! WOOWOO!
Kratos: -_-'
What? I like those pairings...but...-stares at Kratos-
Kratos: ...What?
I LOVE YOU MORE! YAY! -runs for him-
Kratos: -sighs- Not again...stop chasing me!
But wait! -stops- Hahaha...I love messin with him. Update~! ^^

So I don't know what to say :D the new chappy was again interesting so I hope it won't take you too long to update *hint hint* ^^

Hey :D nice chappy though a bit too short for my liking (though good stories seem always too short for me so just ignore it :D)

About Sheloyd: I like this couple and since this whole story focuses on sheena (at least up too now - dunno what you're going to write *g*) at would be logic to make it sheloyd. But that's just my opinion :D

*g* YAY A new chappy :D Hey for some reason I really liked the scene where Sheena suddenly sniggered (don't know why *g*)

Been waiting for someone to do something like this ^_^

I await more tidings ^_^

If you stop... then i'll stop! Well maybe not or I maybe stop either way. Mwah i liked this chapter ^^ Altough it feels like everything is flashing by! Slow down a little, make the chapters a tad longer so one can enjoy a bit longer. Describe the surroundings a bit more! Then again i'm a fast reader... damn.

WHAT?! Don't you dare to abandon this story! Really this is far too good to simply stop here!

Hey I really love this fic :D