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xD! That was great.

haha funny

Omg This was hilarious! XD I still laugh every time I read this!

LOL! It was rather short but managed to make up for that with its hilarity! But, unfortunately, the comedy couldn't make up for the lack of a background story or description... BUT I STILLED LAUGHED!

"“Wha? Roxas, I love her, but I’m not a stalker.”

“For you, there is no difference.”

“Well, what about the way you act about Namine?”

“What do you mean?”

“I mean, this...”


Axel fumbled around in the washing machine for a few minutes, and pulled out some kind of dress-like thing.

“And that is...?”

“Namine’s pajamas.”

“Oh my gawd, let me see! Come on, Axel, just let me smell it!”

“Uh-huh. And I’m the stalker!”"

hmm... i wish there was more to it but it was funny!

hehe

amusing, and random
but fun for a quick read

Wow...So random, but I liked it, and I'm so bored right now...But it was still kind of funny. You shouold do random stuff like this more often!

Finally! A story with Roxas and Axel in it that isn't a sick disturbed yaoi! Thanks, it was very funny.

Tgat was funny...update soon!

Stalkers on the loose! Run for your lives!
(Great story!)

HAHA yes it was funny! XD

Ha That was funny, esp. when Roxas wanted Namine's clothing so badly! heehee good job! I hope u write more, kay? Bye bye!

Lol...yes, that was entertaining, and I also thank you for not writing Axel/Roxas. (But I still didnt like the implied pairings, but I won't complain because it was funny!) Anyways, I did get a little confused when they were talking...like...uhh...well, just next time, don't just put a ton of dialogue and not say "Axel said" or whatnot. Not that you have to say that every time, just occasionally when it's a long slur of dialogue. (Gahh...I just can't explain things today...) Anyways, it was no biggie really because it was short...so yeah. You did a good job!

KUDOS TO YOU FOR NOT HAVING AXEL/ROXAS!! YEY XD This was funny...very good ^^ and there was that mentioning of Axel/Larxene too, so that made me very happy