OMG TOHRU SWORE!

:D this is so cute! ^_^ I love it! ;P

w00tness.
This is awesome. =D
Makes me happy to see some arguing again.

...

Well, not really.
But that's okay!
Keep updating!

♥-Emby

This is really great! ^_^ I have to comment on how you do diologe. How people usally do it is

"hi." Kyo mumbled quietly to the girl he finnally admited he had a crush on. at least to his self...

"sup?" Uo replied casually.

See? lol, yeah, mostly people try to use the " instead of '. just a tip! ^_^

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~
-Nyrocat.

(PS. Thanks for reviewing on my story!! ~

I really liked this story! I can't wait to read more...there is going to be more, right? I NEED MORE!!

That was so funny! Everyone was so in character it could have been part of the actual anime! My fave part was: "Shigure couldn't contain himself. His laughter was barely suppressed by sheer shock! 'Well, it's obvious our sweet impressionable Tohru has been influenced by such careless and roughish men that she has simply lost her innocence!'"

I liked it, it was kinda like drabble. I liked it. Good job ^^

Tohru's been listening to Kyo too much!
xD!

~Dukoro-chan

I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW!

lol tohru swearin thats great :)

You should add more! yay! this was Kawaii! loved it!
~Yukiluver, Michelle~

This was just fine, I really liked it. I'm writing my first FB fanfic as well so I understand.

This fanfic sounded so official like it could be part of the actual manga. You did a great job! ^_^

Aw...your first FB story...it was really funny to read. I like this one. Good luck with more stories!