 Barranca 5/4/08 . chapter 1What a scary story! I like short but poignant fics like this. |
 dogbertcarroll 12/2/04 . chapter 1Excellent! |
 Sue D 11/27/01 . chapter 1 I really love stuff like that. So, where's the rest? ) Please, please, please... |
 Delete12345 8/31/01 . chapter 1First word that comes to mind: striking. (';') |
 Empress Torch 7/8/01 . chapter 1nice stort... a bit short |
 Neslor 6/23/01 . chapter 1 not bad, but I dont know who Hellorin is |
 arameth 6/18/01 . chapter 1 You cheated! More please! Seriously, I loved it. |