Cool story, my friend.

The Swordsman

that was super short...

Really good! I'm actually glad that Shiori can find out these things... well in your fic anyway. It'd be really nice for Shiori to find out about Shuichi. Well, off to the next! ^^ Cya!

Aw, cute ^^
I hope one day he does tell her.

this fic was quite good. it really had me thinking about shiori's feelings and how she and kurama really got along. i liked reading this story from her viewpoint. i can't wait to read the sequel!!

This fic started out as a breeding plot bunny? Then let it breed some more *laughs maniacly(sp?)* This was absolutly fantastic. I love how you showed the teams interaction from the point of view of someone who didn't know about them. I also love Shiori htinking about her son because I am sure that is exactly how she would percieve him! I really want a sequel... really.

(oh, loved its prequel by the way, it was very beautifully written)

I like the story, so I'll check your presequel!

Interesting one-shot. Nicely written and well done. The charecters are done well and I enjoyed Shiori's pov.

Kurama sounded like he was on crack. xD That's funny. But jeez, Shiori and Kazuya must be SO confused... lol I'm surprised HE didn't go and see what happened at the blood comment. Anyway, AWSOME~!

make a sequel were Kurama confesses. ANd then her reaction.

i am begging you. Upload one of those days because this was so awsome i can't stand it! It is the only one of my favorites that i there because it is my favorite!

I thought I already reviewed this months ago...oh well! I still really enjoy it. Shiori's turned into my favorite Yu Yu Hakusho character and she has about two lines. Your characterization was luverly.

'Squeals,' I love these types of fanfictions! Shiori finding out. By what I've come to on your profile, there's an intended sequel. right? Please, please do post it up as soon as you can! Continue the great work, I'll be on the lookout!

That was cool...hee hee. Kurama sounded like he was drunk!

i like thi. is there going to be a sequel?