Oh boy... Poor Este. Oh well, my favorite character so far is Dash. Keep up the good work, i like the way your story is coming so far =)

wewt^^ you updated! i loved the chapters. you kept the story moving at a nice pace while keeping a light humorful storyline. *claps* keep it up^^

nice poem^^ just wondering... whats talk like a pirate day O__O;

lmao, that was a really funny chapter ^^ keep up the good work! =)

I LOVE it! its really well written and i like all the characters already hehe :D

Nice story, very well written ^^ I couldnt find any errors, except the taru didnt speak with the accent. was that because shes from mhaura? anyways, keep up the good work^^