That was a very good story, my friend! I really liked the ending, it was the perfect top off.

Write again soon!

Great ending to this story. It's nice to see That SS still does have a heart. Keep up the good work.

Nicely played. SS has a streak of protection in him, even if he's off the deep end a bit. Cool.

O-o-o-o-o, this is tense, and the fight scenes well written.

I apologize. I think I misread SS for SE in your summary. I see that SS is storming the castle while the knights are at play...

WOW! what a killer first chapter. Can't wait to read the next one and see what happens.

Trying to keep under my radar, eh? Well, I'll let you pass this time, ToB, but I expect the rest soon.

As to the story itself, a few good points you made. Service is not servitude. I liked your President's words to the pair.

As to K and K...dude...can't wait to see who opens the whoop-axe on them!

Well don't keep us waiting then, alright? I love your stories more than mine!