That was funny where Demy said “then we have to wade through a freezing cold brook. Hope your pink elephant under pants don’t get too wet!”
I loved it. Demy has one weird family... I read every chapter and yeah. Anyway, really funny and UPDATE!!

Again, short, but not as fillery.
Oh, the noise I made when I saw the word "Marky" on the page...

Snicker. This'll be fun.

Aww, I liked that.

Very intresting what you did. I hope you write more, Demy!

Can You Please Continue.

Lol. Another good chapter. It was kind of short, but I can't complain since I do the same thing. I thought that the last part was great. Larten carolling, it is just funny to picture in the mind.

...Christ.
What the HELL?! That went fast...
6/8...Hmm.

Good chapter.Very intresting. I am going to keep on reading until the end.

Shadowy Nightmare

Hm. Short. Oh yes, quite short. And somewhat boring, too.

LOL. You told me about this, but it was even funnier to read.

a) you just come up with a new species every day, dont you?
b) its VAMPANEZE, not VAMPIREZE. get it right.
c) barefaced liar. 'im gonna finish all of the third book in this chapter...'

Great chapter!

Great chapter!

No, seriously, what are they eating?

Woah - talk about one big, seriously screwed up family ! This was an awesome chapter - even though I needed to reread the part on Demy's family history several times to get it through my head lol... Please update ASAP !

~Jo