 dontgiveahoot 6/8/01 . chapter 1This is a really great poem. In my mind, ChibiUsa is an underrated character. Sure, she can be frustrating at times, and sometimes you think "Enough with the damn PINK already, give me another colour, ANY colour!" But for an young child she is actually resourceful, intelligent and mature, and I have always thought that she views the Neo-King and Neo-Queen as her parents, while the present Usagi and Mamoru are more of a sisterly figure and a big brother/first crush figure. Mainly, in my opinion, she does all that Mamo-chan stuff to rile Usagi. You've done an excellent job in putting her feelings in writing, clear and articulate while still having the feel of a young person talking. Great job! |