Good afternoon!
I would like to tell that I read very many fics in English, but I seldom make comments, because it is not my native language. Nevertheless your story has made huge impression upon me, more than any another which I read. So I want to tell you many thanks, it was such pleasure for me to read it! Practically I have read all forty six chapters for three days. I extremely like such type of story as yours. I mean, the alternative story with the separate moments similar for the moments of a canon is cool! And your vision of characters, and how you show the various points of view, and, certainly, a fascinating plot... Well, I simply do not know enough words to express the admiration, really. I’m in delight! Excuse me, I’m afraid, I don’t speak English very well, but I must tell you. It’s great!
PS: And certainly, I so wish to see continuation!

Enjoying the story! Can't wait to see where you take this plot. Like the way you use Han for comic relief.

"Han fell back into place with a groan. So Sara was here too, still out cold. Stuck in a box with the two twerplings. The only worse scenario he could imagine was being stuck in a box with their dad."

"One way or another, Vader has got to go.” - No! I'm not going to be happy if you knock off Vader. He's not saint but Organa doesn't have a leg to stand on as far as good behavior goes.

As for whether Vader was out of character it depends. He has no reason to show anything to Bail and particularly wants to kill him for keeping him from his child. Threatening to kill Leia to force cooperation from an enemy isn't the same as actually being willing to do so. He's got a long way to go to forge a relationship with her and that little display did nothing to help but I don't think his threat was serious.

But what about Orlin? Vader can't be serious. He's hardly in any shape to be a legit threat to Palpatine. What does Anakin have in mind?

I'm also shocked that you had Lando convince Luke to remain with the twins. That's rather astounding. I'm really glad you updated but am sad to hear our adventure is almost over. Just what side Thrawn is really on could be a whole nother story itself.

Real Life can be a pain but I hope you've had the opportunity to keep writing. I can't wait for the next update. I'll try to respond faster myself.

HOLY **.

I found this on some other site and it killed an entire day of could-have-been-productive work for me. I don't even

This is my new favorite thing ever. I don't know what to say about it, but it's kind of awesome and I love everything about it and you have my undying love. I haven't read anything this entertaining in frikkin' ages. Props.

Keep it up.

cool chapter

i just love it when you make vader interacting with leia, it s quite emotional. i hope from all my heart that you ll make a happy ending to this story; vader deserves a little happiness to warm his heart. would his children heal his wounds?

I don't know how you managed it, but half the time I'm reading this, I'm laughing hilariously with this, and half the time I'm wincing at the fact that I found something funny in such an untenable situation. Very well done. Thanks for the good read.

Actually I think Lord Vader is acting very much like himself. Great chapter!

<3 I love SW family AU's, and reading this story really made my day. Hope you stay with it 'til the end! :D

Just found this story yesterday and caught up to your latest fantastic, amazing, complicated, fascinating, and addicting chapter today!

I was trying to savor each chapter but got too caught up and had to eat them all. Hmm, there must be chocolate hidden in them somewhere!

The twists and turns of the story are amazing as are the characters!

More choco--I mean chapters please!

this is awesome sause and you should KEEP IT UP :)

Wow. The odds of reconciling all our heros at this point looks pretty grim! Can't wait to see how it all ends!

Wow. REALLY glad to see this back again. What a great chapter. It had glimpses into everyone's situation, except Han's. The twins and "Kwishy" are so funny and cute. I'm wondering why Luke stayed instead of going to find Han, though. He's not going to rescue him by staying in his ship.

This is absolutely brilliant! You're amazing! This story had me on the edge of my seat from the first sentence of Chapter 1! I look forward to future chapters!

Very very very very GOOD.
But I HATRED Bail Organa. MUCH!