 fire19 2007-10-12 . chapter 1heheh ... nice story ... liked the ending =] |
 Nintendo Queen 2007-01-23 . chapter 1LOL! That is so cute and so funny. I loved the part where they say his birthday is not for another month. Too too too cute. I adored it. Beautiful job. This pairing rules. |
 DarkPrincessPyro99 2006-10-05 . chapter 1i liked this story |
 Chi Yagami 2006-09-20 . chapter 15 bars of chocolate! sweet story! and Seto's birthday wasnt even for another month! lol |
 Rain 2006-09-15 . chapter 1 Wow. I really like the way you portray the characters. Except for a few spelling problems, that was really good. |
 Aeflid 2006-08-25 . chapter 1Loved the verse at the beginning XD Oh, and the fic was great too... it's so awesome to meet another Azureshipping Christian XD |
 Your number one fan 2006-08-22 . chapter 1 This is perfect in every way. Absolutely stunning. The perfect amounts of humor, romance, and everything. This story made my day, seriously... I love you. |
 Unforgivable Horror 2006-08-14 . chapter 1 Lol. That was funny. It was hilarious at the end when theyt said his birthday was a month away. Lol. When would they realize that? It was funny. I really liked it. later! |
 ImotoHiNeko 2006-08-11 . chapter 1Aww, that was so cute!
=^_^= Meow!! |
 Steeple333 2006-08-08 . chapter 1This was realy good. Unlike a lot of other (crappy) oneshots out there, this came with its own background. =] There was precedence, which is really very important in a romantic story. The timing was very nice, and the writing was good, too. ^_^ |
 Azurite 2006-08-08 . chapter 1First time I read this last night, the idea of the title relating to a birthday didn't even occur to me until everyone shouted SURPRISE! I was just as startled as Kaiba.
I wanted to give it a thorough read-through when I was awake and refreshed, just to make sure I wasn't missing anything in my astonishment that you'd updated! My eyes did widen upon seeing the update in my box!
I like it-- for the fluff, for the descriptions, and yet the characterizations are quite good, too. There are a few random spelling errors -an of got turned into an os somewhere, and some an's had d's tacked on- and a few missing commas or apostrophes, but I still enjoyed it thoroughly (though I suppose I'm having a moment of hypocrisy in not "getting" the omake). I especially liked the "exuberant kiss." Somehow I can't imagine Seto doing anything with "exuberance" (wasn't "Irrational Exuberance" that bizarre flash video with the fruits and the Yatta! song?), but you made me believe he could... even if he's not a singing fruit.
Thanks for the pleasant surprise and the cute fluff. Now fork over RotH! |
 AvidReaderAlso 2006-08-08 . chapter 1Did you enjoy your chocolate? lol. I liked this 'oneshot' very much. Well written, good descriptions, witty (liked Otogi's parting shot ;)) and one of my favourite themes -- Seto and Anzu. A nice piece which can easily stand alone. :) |
 Simply Alex 2006-08-08 . chapter 1That was just so wonderful! So sweet and funny! Seto must have loved his first surprise party! Seto flirting with Anzu is just so delightful! I can just imagine all the others trying to sneak a look at them on the ice, lol! Then the end, just so funny! This was just terrific, thanks you for writing something that made me smile so much! |
 Anonymous 2006-08-08 . chapter 1 This is SO much better than what I expected! ...Not that I had low expectations. Otherwise, I wouldn't have bothered to issue a challenge :).
I absolutely LOVE this fic! This is exactly what I have been missing from the Yu-Gi-Oh! fandom. It seems like there just aren't that many high-quality fics out there anymore. But *this*! This is amazing, and I can't thank you enough for responding to my challenge with a wonderful fic like this! :D
I love the fact that Seto has started falling for Anzu. Mischievious Mokuba was so adorable. I loved the sweetness of the ice rink scene - and the flashback from Seto's past was a nice touch! Anzu telling Seto that she would always be around to catch him was a pleasant switch: it was nice to hear a girl say that instead of a guy. But I think that my favorite parts about this fic were the fluff (of course!) and the fact that it wasn't Seto's actual birthday! That made me grin madly - especially when everyone else didn't want to tell Anzu. Oh, and the omake at the end was a humorous touch.
This one-shot was wonderful. Once again, thanks! It's 8 AM, and you have officially made my day! :D
BTW, I am VERY happy to hear that Riddles of the Heart is possibly going to get an update! After all, being on hiatus is better than being permanently discontinued, in my opinion. |
 Almandine-Azaleea 2006-08-08 . chapter 1That was brilliant! So sweet and the flow was so lovely- not too fast not too slow.
Absolutely loved the little flash back scene especially where Anzu catches Seto.
The depiction of the characters was accurate and stayed true to the originals, which is always a good thing. ^_^
The conclusion was very comical indeed! All in all a really wonderful story!
It was just so lovely and I love how you infused everything with a sense of warmth and tenderness.
Oh, and Seto's first reactions- awesome! Also, I love when Mokuba goes scheming away like that.
I nearly cried when Seto said he didn't have a childhood- such a simple statement yet so profound. I can totally see him saying this!!
So, yes, the conclusion would be that this is a truly, most wonderful story! Thank you for writing it!! |