Hm, there is a wonderful simplicity to this piece that makes the scene extremley poignant. You added only a few details, (her beating heart and her pursed lips for instance) and because they were so few in number, they really stood out.

You also wrote a House/Cam fic that stayed true to the characters. (I have major issues with ooc pieces.) V. nice.

Lovely.

Good you should continue it though.

Wow...Please, please, please update soon!

o nice...
update soon

Oh wow, excellent fic! Please write more!

Very nice. I could see it as if it were right in front of me, and feel it like I were the one involved. Great work.

:O! Like It, But Like I Dont Like AllisonxHouse, I think Its... Weird. CuddyxHouse Much Better.

StacyxHouse NEVER! NO!

Anyway Keep Writing I Love It