um...its good but why is this rated T

lmao! i <3 charles dickens! i read oliver twist and actually went to the play. very very good. btw, i'm an american, but i'll be a japanese citizen when i get older. cant wait!

rly good story. i like it alot. sasori is being a little asshole, as much as i <3 him.

please, please, please, could you continuet it??
I love your plot!! it's great!!

an the lemmons *¬* (drools) xD!!

please!! I'm begging you! finish it!!

wow. Dei and Sasori really took a hit in the one. but it's good that they got to Tsunade. please write more soon. I love this story!

yay for you and your awesome writing! Can't wait for the next one!

wow this is awsome update soonb please

hiz! lol i have now figured out what a lemon is...--laghs evily-- ya i'm amrican and i hate what amrica did to japan acully i cant evan spell amrica evan tho i live here...weard. any way ur story is one of the better sasoXdei's i'v read. you probably might wanna up the rateing from T to M cuz of the 'lemons' --gigles uncontrolibly-- me likie lemons, and pizza. --sighs and looks off into the distince-- pizza... any way this is an extremlly long review. so ya thats it.
Peace.

This story is awesome. I'm on the edge of my seating wanting to know what'll happen next!

I...I want to hit you with something...It took you FOREVER to update. I thought you had given up on this without telling anyone...But im happy that you hadnt quit...im also confused. Did deidara lose his eye or did he just injor it? Great chapter anyway.

The calvary has arrived!!


Sorta. UPDATE SOON!! :D

OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG, OMFG!
-glomps to death- U FINALLY FREAKING UPDATED!
I lurves u so much at the moment! (I am such a hypocrite, hahaha)
I thought u were giving up on the series... and that made me sad! -sniffles-
But now im oober happy, and stuffs!
Cant blame u with the school, school is hard to keep up with, so, I KEEP NO GRUDGES! -glomps again-

O.O

oops... sorry for squeezing u to death!

Interesting story ^^ Hope you'll update soon.

I guess I'll stop here (Will continue to read tomorrow XD) Anway, I like it so far. ^^ Your style of writing is neat and the plot is good too.

Love your writing style. ^^ I guess I'll read the rest of the chapters too.