Absolutely amazing. Amidst a sea of copycats, rehashes and in some cases just bad writing, you've not only found a format that no one I've seen on this site has ever used before, you've also imparted your own spin on canon, and done it well to boot. This is definitely one of my favorite fics, and I can only hope that you'll come out of your long silence with the next chapter as soon as possible. Keep writing!

I'm not sure if this fic has been "abandoned" but if it has I shall feel sorely disappointed. This is a wonderful read which has greatly entertained me thus far. I do Hope you gather inspiration and choose to finish this excellent, witty, humorous, dramatic,and sweet story. I want to know how it ends! It is far too good to quit!

With your unique approach and use of nicknames, I have been inspired to write something anonymously of my own because I have a few nicknames of my which I come up with privately, but I do think it would make for some great entertainment.

sincerely,
-Jade

For the love of all that is right in the world please finish this story. It is the single most AMAZING piece of work I have had the pleasure of reading on this site. No story has come close to this level that I can think of, though I've yet to read your other stories I'm going to have to do so.

A masterpiece of writing. The way you've presented this story has made it a true privilege to read and I can't possibly compliment it enough. I know it's been over two years since this story was last updated and I have no idea if you're still writing - but if you are I beg of you to come back and try to finish this story. It would be a true tragedy to allow this work to languish incomplete.

m, are you going to update?! cuz holy freaking crap, i love your story! it kept me hooked the whole way, and im still hooked! please please please please please dont abandon this! update please! PLEASE!!


haha, now i sound desperate...update!

This story is amazing. Apparently long dead though :(

Provided you still read these comments: bloody well done chap.

this story has been one of the best damn reads i've had in a long long while
although it scares me that you haven't updated this story in over two years
Though i really want to and will believe that this amazing story will continue on
you write with such passion, that every chapter mirrors your convictions
and the amount of emotion laced into every scene is just awe-inspiring
i think you are about the first to come up with the story's orginal style and plot, and still the only one to pull it off so well
thank you for the amazing read
no matter when it is, looking forward to your next update

This story is probably the most amazing fanfiction I have ever read. The way you keep comparing the people around Naruto to gods and goddesses is simply awe-inspiring. It is most likely exactly what he feels for them.

I would be so proud of myself if I could ever write something like this one day. If or when that day comes, I hope that you will read it yourself and give me a long review on what you think of it.

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Yours truly
Kiri, Tearful Reunion

damn good read

I sincerely hope you continue this story with all my heart. Maybe that sounds odd, however I have never read anything like this before, not with such truth of passion and conviction. Maybe this sounds silly to you or just too cliche to acknowledge in anything but disdain, I feel it is the truth. I am not an overly emotional person . . . And yet, I have come to tears, experienced pure fury, and fell in love with a sweet boy.

Though true penmanship is not in whether the story is original from the beginning, but what one can do with what they are given or use. As I said before, I hope more will come. In fact, I feel as if I cannot wait, constantly scanning for more of your tale. May you have the Good Fortunes and Fair Winds.

I am really enjoying you underneath the underneath. Your version has so many twists that as a cable it could holdup a major bridge! And I love it.

Your blending of the book, what actions are that are not completely explained in the book, and the reactions of the readers is very well done. Makes me really want to see what you will dream up next.

O_O, If you keep going, as the ladies get together, Naruto may have a hel.. uh, heck of a harem waiting for him.

Might I suggest you call Mighty Guy, and Rock Lee, Loud and Louder. Your choice you whether your associated that with their voices, or their choice in clothes. Or both.

Thank you for a very good, fun and "interesting" read.


May the MUSE always be with you!
~!^

Hello! I would like to express my enjoyment of this fiction. I also beg you to consider continuing to write this fiction. Please, it is too good to abandon. I wish you good luck, and hope that you continue and eventually finish this story.

Great work.

Beautiful chapter, thank you for writing it.

Great work. Naruto Knows Jyuuken (Gentle Fist) Or was it a different stile created by him and Sensei.