 LAIsobel 2/27/09 . chapter 1There is something really important here... And I must say I like it a lot. It is the last sentence... "Maybe it was love, he'd heard stories that this is what it was like, but he'd never actually felt it, not until he met Teyla"... It is just truth.
Short story but with one sentence of pure kind wisdom.
It is nice :o) |
 gorjussgirl 12/30/06 . chapter 1 gud
(cant b botherd 2 sign in soz) |
 carsonfreelancer 8/27/06 . chapter 1This is the first fic I've read in a while, and it was awesome. Short and sweet. |
 CharmedAli 8/14/06 . chapter 1aww that's so sweet i love it |
 jr forever 8/13/06 . chapter 1Aww! I wish they had said that on the show! It was really good. |
 spiritedchihiro 8/8/06 . chapter 1hehe...aw too cute...wish he had said that! |
 noro 8/8/06 . chapter 1Another story well done Cpt.Ritter keep those stories comming in. |
 Yarrharr 8/8/06 . chapter 1this is good! definitely gets into the characters' thoughts, even though it's so short. I couldn't resist writing about that conversation either :) |
 jtjaforever 8/8/06 . chapter 1As always Cpt. your story due short was insightful. I could see this happening on the show(or I wish I could) LOL - wishful thinking.
Thanks for a great read. |
 Nicole1 8/8/06 . chapter 1Aww great little fic :)) i loved it |
 firefly827347 8/8/06 . chapter 1Aww, that was really sweet. Nice job. |
 doxymom 8/8/06 . chapter 1 Aw, so sweet. I like it Capt. :-) |
 Ocean 8/8/06 . chapter 1 That was really sweet. I do hope the writers take John and Teylas relationship to the next stage as they have a way of portraying feelings that is so natural and believable. |
 Camy 8/8/06 . chapter 1 AW..too cute! |