aw...poor thing.
awesome story though, it pulled me in big time.
great job

Very nice.

I never really spent too much time thinking about Jet, but this goes in depth into describing a possible scenario of what made him how he came to be his horrible moody self.

*Kudos*

that was amazing! truly...i mean it...keep it up!!

A beautiful end. Poetic.
Poor Jet. He needs a hug.
((If only every problem could be solved with a hug. I would win wars with my hugging power!))

Dark and beautiful.
I love the last line. Love, love, love.
((Great use of my favorite word.))
This is beautiful work. Watching demons take it all away.
Did I hear mention of a second part? I hope so.
::Hopes::