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| ForLoveorMoney 2008-06-12 ch 2, | abuseaw...poor thing. awesome story though, it pulled me in big time. great job |
| .Lady.Meister. 2006-09-11 ch 2, | abuseVery nice. I never really spent too much time thinking about Jet, but this goes in depth into describing a possible scenario of what made him how he came to be his horrible moody self. *Kudos* |
| MagikfIngers 2006-08-24 ch 2, | abusethat was amazing! truly...i mean it...keep it up!! |
| Jimmy the Gothic Egg 2006-08-09 ch 2, | abuseA beautiful end. Poetic. Poor Jet. He needs a hug. ((If only every problem could be solved with a hug. I would win wars with my hugging power!)) |
| Jimmy the Gothic Egg 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseDark and beautiful. I love the last line. Love, love, love. ((Great use of my favorite word.)) This is beautiful work. Watching demons take it all away. Did I hear mention of a second part? I hope so. ::Hopes:: |