Oh, man! Cliffhanger! Nice ending. I absolutely loved this story and can't wait for the next one. You always have my support!

Hi, it's been a long time, I apologize! I wanted to let you know that I've read all of the chapters and I like it! It seems that whatever trouble you were having with MS Word was fixed because I haven't found any more type errors like before _

And a question: WHAT ABOUT EDGE AND RYDIA! hehe, sorry, I hope you continue a story about them as well. Because...well...we're still in an Edge/Rydia shortage :(

I'll do my best to finish up the next saga and a half about Rydia so that I can FINALLY get to Edge/Rydia because...well...AH! Okay. I'm done now.

Anyway, good job, and good luck on the next one! _

Oh, only one more! Wow, what a shame, I love this story! Great chapter, by the way. I was on the edge of my seat! Can't wait for the last chapter!

Wow...Things are really heating up! Great chapter.

Suspended? Wow I'm sorry. And no computer? That must have been torture! Congrats on your new brother too! Anyway, nice chapter!

Yay! I love the suspense!

I love this story! Continue!

Aww, a dolphin that's so cool. A thousand appoliges for not reviewing in so long, but with school and everything else going on i don't have time. I still love it, don't worry!

Oh, wow you really scared me for a minute there! I almost cried when Angel did that. And I like how you included Golbez too! Great chapter.

It’s actually kind of funny. I had written a fanfiction for FFIV about six or seven years ago, and in it Rosa and Cecil also had twin daughters. One was a tomboy and the other was a complete girl. Haha…oh man. No one will ever see that fic though…as it was never finished and then my old computer ate most of the file…but ANYWAY, This was a cute chapter. I like how you set up the twins meeting the characters who will propel them into the rest of their adventure. And Edge and Rydia! :) I’d love to get that surprise on MY birthday!

I do have some things to point out about the formatting though…I got a bit confused while reading the dialogue, but mostly because all of the lines are jammed together in one paragraph. Every time a new speaker says something, it should be a new indented paragraph. I don’t know if is screwing up the formatting (it’s done that to me a couple times), but otherwise, all of the dialogue should be separated every time someone new speaks something.

I liked this beginning, and I've already read some of the other chapters, but I'll make my way through it completely. Hehe...oh, escaping on an airship...

I also have some revisions for this chapter if you want them...mostly grammar stuff. I would put them here but...it would eat your review page because I tend to write a lot. Let me know and I can send them to you from your profile.

Till next chapter!

myth.

No! Thats such an evil cliffhangar! Update soon please!

Oh god, poor Red! The desert fever huh? Nice touch including that little bit. Anyway, awesome chapter!

Yay, I knew she could do it! Yay for Angel! I hope she'll be alright. Well anyway, great chapter!

Oh, man I can't wait! She'll pass won't she? She is Cecil's daughter.

Oh, it's getting interesting! I can't wait to see what happens on mount ordeals!