more more!!

Good story! I hope you update soon.

yay, I read it!! Its good... aree those birth control pills? I hope so, depressive or vitamins would be kinda boring... But where are they going? And why is Snape being NICE? Make him a bit snarkier next chapter?? Please? I love snarky Snape... I can't believe you just ended the family line. That's slightly harsh. Oh well... Anyway, update soon!

Hi! This is the first story that I have read from FanFiction. Your writing was very descriptive but of course nothing could compare to how Rowling writes. I am not at all trying to be rude it's just that,that's how I feel. Anyway you shouldn't be bothered by negative things, just take these few words of encouragement- live, love, and learn. Those are the few good things that this world has to offer and you should be lifted up by them.:)

i love the beginning to this story..its very well written...keep it going!

awesome! can't wait for more!

wow, this looks interesting. Can't wait to see what you do with it.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this story will go. Please continue to update!

awsome!I loved it and can't wait for the next chapter!

OUTstanding! Do continue :-)