that's sweet

wow this was so cool!! i got a bit confused about the italics in the beginning but w/e it was great!!

This is really very good. Great job!

wahh~
i like ur style of writing~

wow... this was really deep... ish...

I really like it, also i think that what you have so far would be pritty true. Because if you thibk about it after Sasuke kills his brother he really dosn't have any other reason to live, his only reason for living is to kill Itachi. So when he finaly get that done, he really won't know what to do with his life. Even more is that he would miss his fanily even more because if you think about he just killed the only other person of his clan, with his hands. I know thats what he wants to do and he thinks he won't feel anything for his brother once hes gone but i think thats not ture. Well anyway can't wate to see what your going to but up next! Till then.

Wow! That was DEEP! There are alot of stories out there where Sasuke kills Itachi, and then he's happy. I think it's impossible for someone who's harbored so much hate to be happy so quickly. I love your story, because it shows Sasuke true emotions in my opinion. Not only that, but the characters are so well written. This is definate going on my favorites list. I can't wait for your next chapter.

Ja!

I can't wait until you update.