Not bad.

interesting. never saw the series of read them, but these characters do seem to click.

dreamer

It needs some work. I'd suggest a rewrite

You need to put more action and gunfire in a gunsmith cats fanfic.

A boring and uneventful bit of revenge, a few paragraphs of meaningless small talk that might as well be about the weather for all the interest it garners, and then they go to have a dance that the reader isn't privileged enough to actually see. Certainly a work well worthy of your literary legacy.

this was cool. I hope you'll write some more.