The title's a little weird... anyways, the fic is good I doubt if Miaka will ever know Nuriko's been keeping stuffs on his own and gets this deep... I like how it's Miaka reflecting after she got back to her real world, some time after Nuriko (sobs) died.

it was so...heaartbreaking! i started crying! i luv thiz fanfic! poor nuriko, he seemed so sad, i luv you!... k, not literally, but i luv ur fanfics!

This is wonderful story, I love you the way you portray miaka and nuriko, I think it accurately protrays how she felt when he died, That's just my opinion though, thank you for writing a wonderful story, it made me cry for nuriko all ovear again. I loved it.

That's so sweet!

Miaka's true strength shines through. Point 1 for Quicksilver. The flashbacks with Nuriko, Hotohori, etc. are amazingly-vivid and perfect. Point 2 for Quicksilver. The ending makes me want to cry over Nuriko all over again. Point 3 for Quicksilver...point 1 for Kleenex brand facial tissues. *yawn* I'm exhausted...arrigato for the excellent fics...I'm off to sleep and dream of violet-haired seishi... *mumbles and slumps at keyboard*

Wow...I really liked this. First of all, you didn't portray Miaka as some sort of a ditz, but as someone who had lost someone *very* close to her. It was done very honestly. Second, I like how you're showing a different side to Nuriko...although we are invited a peek at this side in the anime, this is a lot more realistic. Especially since this side wasn't really shown until it was time to build up Nuriko's character a bit before he died...gomen. Anyway, I can't wait to see the rest of this series of yours.