Makes me wonder how complicated their relationship really is because of everything in both game. Great fic^^

This was really great. I loved all the descriptions that made their characters come to life..I could see this playing out in my head as clearly as though it were a cutscene. Awesome! Ada/Leon forever :D

Damn...just when it gets real good!

You certainly are very good with words. The mood you created with them was simply perfect. Dark, foreshadowing and all that.

Very good!

the story is very good i like it

Holy crap, I'm pretty much in love with you.

I don't know what to say, except maybe that I agree with all the previous comments. ^^ Good job and keep it up. I know its really difficult to keep characters in character but you pulled it off nicely here. Again, well done. :)

Thought the part where she reveals it was her, and not Leon whom Wesker was very climatic. Very Ada-ish to tell Leon one thing and mean another. Were you intending to make this a "farewell Leon" fic?

I think RobinHicks, Ada Kennedy and I are thinking along the same lines. haha

"Are you going to turn this drabble into an entire story? I think it would make an excellent story"
- RobinHicks

"Are you going to continue this. Because it would make a good story"
- Ada Kennedy

That was amazing! After playing RE4 and reading a novelisation of RE2 I've become really intregued with Leon and Ada's relationship. I think it's unique, exotic, mysterious and tragic. Your fic captured that perfectly!

That was marvellously written. I love your use of metaphors and how you described Ada's sexiness and how mysterious she is. I never really played RE2 but it looked like they had something going on there, eh...

Keep up the great work!

Your story has so much passion in it, that I'm still sweating.

Nice Fanfic ^^

I love they both

Greetings and up soon a new fanfic

bYE

Hello!

I agree with the other reviewers, you truly have a gift for writing! Are you going to turn this drabble into an entire story? I think it would make an excellent story (just make sure it ends well! *wink*) I'm a fan of the Ada and Leon pairing, and I'm usually sorely disappointed when I read a fan fiction like this.

I wasn't this time. I can tell you got a beta reader. I didn't see any major mistakes or anything. There's nothing to critique. I just encourage you to keep writing!
-Robin Hicks

Wow! That was amazing. Are you going to continue this. Because it would make a good story. Your grammer was perfect. I didn't find a single mistake. You did really well with this story.
A.Kennedy

Wow...I was blown away by this story. Usually, I find that Ada/Leon fics are poorly written, but you have such an obvious gift with English. When the story ended, it left behind all these beautiful sentences: "giving the impression of something exotic, vampiric and voluptuously predatory"...Great work. I'd love to see you write more.

That. Was. Terrific. Beautiful work you have written. For your first time on a Resident Evil 4 fic, it was damn good. Please write more stories like this. The Leon Kennedy & Ada Wong relationship is underappreciated, and a fic with those two as the pairing is rare. But please, write more Resident Evil stories that are just like this story, because it is absolutely brilliant.