Wow... That was powerful... I'm not sure what else to say about it. I guess I'm stunned, and if I may say so, that is something to be proud of! Stunning me, I mean. Because it was really stunning. Just out of curiosity, who was the girl? It's strange, the boy was Harry, but at the time, he wasn't... You sort of created your own Harry. It doesn't make sense, and I can't explain it. I don't know how, but I liked it. =)

awsome. i love it! very anne rice like. amazing!

Wow! This was very great! I totally loved it. Your way of writing is amazing!

Sequelsequelsequel! even if it has to small and poetic.
because no matter what. obviously your writing wins.
i am sincerly your fan forever.
aahh...i love this like the rest of your fics.

Warning to fellow non-authors of this fic who may chance across this review (I'm new to the site and not entirely sure just who can access the reviews): maybe don't read this review until you've read the story? Might sort of contain a spoiler.

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This is f*ing amazing. There is nothing I would change. You did a chillingly beautiful job treating the dark, horrific pain and loss experienced by 'our favourite victim' in a detached and yet utterly entranced manner from the perspective of the 'fanged-one'. This is going on my favourites list! (So are you...I also read and loved the passing notes stories)

Bravo.
There are not words.

This is the first of your writings that I have read and I marvel at your skill with the written word.
You convey so clearly the depth of feeling the main character feels toward the other that by the end I could feel his longing, feel that last drawn out moment...

Truly a captivating piece.

uhh, ooc yes (which I usually don't like), but when pretending that it wasn't suppossed to be a Harry/Draco I really liked it. Very special and creepy and beautiful! The way you described harry through Draco, his emotions and such, was great!

Oh, Gosh, that was beautifully written! Just perfect. I loved it. You did excellent on telling Draco's point of view, and you gave quite a bit of details. Everything made sense, and I could really understand Draco's feelings, and thoughts. As well as Harry's: even though it was not from his point of view you described it well. I am impressed. Keep writing, I will definitly be taking a look at your other work. This truly was brilliant.


~Elvia

I love it. x4794083175980314.

Woah. This was strong **. Really, really good.

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Deep.

Those school assignments...*shakes head* I'll tell you what, just a BREEDING GROUND for boyloveliness/hot sex/mushy, sweaty touching, like mosquitoes...'tis nice, except, you know, mosquitoe bites itch and beg to scratched and...yeah, they aren't that different now that I think about it. o.0 Anyway, lovely, darling.

wow this was very good . I was very suprised when at the end Draco ended up being a vampire. Draco's view of Harry was so creepy though he made it seem like Harry was something to collect but i have to admit it was way better than any of the other discriptions i've read. I think that your teacher should have given you an A+! please write a sequel!

Amazing. I love how you captured Draco's view of Harry. It left me breathless!! Absolutely amazing!!

That was dark... really dark...and creepy... OMG it was creepy... I Didn't Like It! I'm partially crying right now... I Hate creepy stuff, but I Loved it. I got into it, and it creeped me out... I Didn't like it! GYAH...

OK Sushi, deep breaths... deep, calm...OK...Ok...ok...good.

Now that I've stopped whimpering in creeped-out-mode, It was a really good story. VERY different from your normals, but good, and creepy. Like creepy-pervert-vamp.-stalker creepy! Did I mention I creepy things creep me out... Gyah... OK Sushi, deep breaths...

What I'm trying to say is it was really good (if you were meaning to be creepy...). And I got into the story and understood and simpathized with Draco's point of view wonderfully, Which Is The Creepy Part! It's really creepy when you realize you would have done the same thing as the person who just killed someone... Gyah... deep breaths...

In conclusion- It was good, but creepy (just to reiterate for the seventh(?) time).

love - a very creeped out WarPrincesushi

P.S.- I might have dramatised my creeped-out-mode level. So if you are slightly worried that you caused permanant damage to my mind, the damage was already done.

wow, really beautiful, it's totaly different from what you wrote before, but equally good. I recently read the vampire cronicles (got inspiration from that?)so I knew very soon the 'me-person' is a vampire. And I though it was draco and the 'he' is harry, that is right, no? This story is indeed darker but wonderfull, beautiful writen. You described it very good especially draco feelings. A fantastic mix between my two favorite series hp and the vampire cronicles(?)